Previously I never woke up in time.
You used to knock me up, put your finger around me to tingle...
And finally to let me see the world around me.
Previously I never woke up in time; did you?
Today I replaced you in every way of yours.
I resonated you.
Can you hear me? Dear I kissed you.
Can't you hear me? I kissed your neck?
I mesmerized you.
Can you feel me? I pushed you in the dark?
Can't you feel me? I gifted you a lantern?
I know you see the world through your eyes.
You forgot that even those are mine.
Are you replacing me now?
Are you shining today?
Won't you wait for me?
Shining?
a true romantic poem..!!
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Feeling the nature makes you natural. I do that, call me anything, better is Durnibar, because that what defines me, tough to stop.
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