Tuesday, October 19, 2010

When the sun rose...

Previously I never woke up in time.
 You used to knock me up, put your finger around me to tingle...
 And finally to let me see the world around me.
Previously I never woke up in time; did you?
Today I replaced you in every way of yours.
 I resonated you.
 Can you hear me? Dear I kissed you.
Can't you hear me? I kissed your neck?
I mesmerized you.
Can you feel me? I pushed you in the dark?
Can't you feel me? I gifted you a lantern?
I know you see the world through your eyes.
You forgot that even those are mine.
Are you replacing me now?
Are you shining today?
                                  Won't you wait for me?
                                                                      Shining?

9 comments:

  1. congratulations for writing such a wonderful poem..!!
    wt 2 call u..an engineer or a photographer or a poet..!!!..cant decide...u ar all of dem..!!!...rj

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  2. Feeling the nature makes you natural. I do that, call me anything, better is Durnibar, because that what defines me, tough to stop.

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  3. Durnibar er "DURNIBAR" prem-mottota ki oshadharon bolistho lekhonishoiley te pranbonto hoye utheche...... :):):):)

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  4. nis.....i love d wrds..and cn feel fragnance of love!!

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  5. Really awesome :-)...mesmerized by all of your poem bro,specially dis 1....

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  6. Really awesome :-)...mesmerized by all of your poem bro,specially this one....

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